FROM TITAN NASH
Rewrote the begining
February 16, 2008 · Titan Nash
I few days ago I woke up and it just came to me that I needed to change the beginning of the book. I decided I was not very happy with the way it started.
It started before with Don on his way home from work. I changed it to Don having a vague dream of the abduction. Sort of a mess really, just random, incoherent jabber, and motion involved in the abduction.
From there it will lead into his day and some events while at work that day. It then moves on to where I started the book before, on his way home from work one day.
I feel this adds some suspense at the beginning, hinting a little more into the core of the book really.
I am excited. I have a date tonight, so this is going to be short.
I already know, this is going to be the woman I marry.← All journal entries
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